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Jordan · Unfettered Joined: 19 Oct 2011 Posts: 430

Loving this series - really creepy and atmospheric. Abbey is officially my favourite hero ever - seriously, how can one girl be so cool?!

**Posted:** Wed Oct 26, 2011 4:23 am

IonCharge · Veteran Joined: 03 Mar 2011 Posts: 127

**Posted:** Wed Oct 26, 2011 5:07 am

punxtr · Die Hard Try Hard Joined: 17 Jul 2010 Posts: 2944

**Posted:** Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:48 am

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hsemagliG · Decorated Joined: 02 Sep 2011 Posts: 160 Location: Florida

First appearance wasn't exactly worth the wait.. ._.

**Posted:** Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:18 am

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I think this vlog has potential, but all the video's of them just hanging out together and doing random stuff isn't really all that important, just establishes the characters (I guess, as there seems to be a lot of them.) As I am a little bit impatient, I think I am going to jump to the video "Hello again... and a letter", assuming that is going to be the first video in which it's story-driven. Am I wrong?

**Posted:** Wed Oct 26, 2011 2:19 pm

IonCharge · Veteran Joined: 03 Mar 2011 Posts: 127

**Posted:** Wed Oct 26, 2011 3:15 pm

AngryDeepground · Entrenched Joined: 25 Jun 2011 Posts: 760

Well the Slender man looks good, but the appearance was not all that intimidating. I can see effort was put in to it, and I have some hope for this series. They need to put a little more stock in to character development though.

Characters are more well defined in adversity than when they are fooling around, and to be honest, I don't know the name of one character besides Abbey. To advance the character development they need to create moments where character, plot driven conversation will be allowed, if they plan on a large cast.

All in all though its not a bad series in my opinion, just not a hooking series yet. But it's early and they could make it better, and I do have faith they will.

**Posted:** Wed Oct 26, 2011 3:22 pm

TheFallenenvoy · Entrenched Joined: 08 Apr 2011 Posts: 826

**Posted:** Wed Oct 26, 2011 4:34 pm

SleepingHellion

**Posted:** Wed Oct 26, 2011 5:59 pm

Tharol

Reading more on the vlogs this vlog is messed up filming.

**Posted:** Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:25 pm

Peregrine · Boot Joined: 27 Oct 2011 Posts: 14 Location: UK

I like the idea of a mute girl who can't express her feelings (namely, fear) as well as the rest of us.

I knew a mute girl myself though once, and she was much more expressive, facially, and with her body language. That's my only (minor) problem with this series. More inclusion of that would make me rather happy.

The poetry is good, too.

**Posted:** Sun Oct 30, 2011 6:50 am

SleepingHellion

**Posted:** Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:01 pm

Tharol

Does this mean there is a zoo keeper.

**Posted:** Sun Oct 30, 2011 1:06 pm

TheFallenenvoy · Entrenched Joined: 08 Apr 2011 Posts: 826

**Posted:** Sun Oct 30, 2011 1:08 pm

Peregrine · Boot Joined: 27 Oct 2011 Posts: 14 Location: UK

**Posted:** Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:52 pm