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Dr.Block

I can't help but laugh when Noah calls Mary a fucking bitch. Still, that whole thing was amazing.

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 12:52 am

ReynardtaFox · Veteran Joined: 19 Feb 2012 Posts: 114

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 4:37 am

Jordan · Unfettered Joined: 19 Oct 2011 Posts: 430

First off, great entry...but....I do have some criticisms of it. But first, Tribe Twelve is back and for that we rejoice Smile

For me, the conversation felt and sometimes too much like exposition rather than a natural conversation. That’s not to say what we learnt wasn’t interesting or haunting or affecting (such as poor Mary’s knowledge that even the remains of her son weren’t safe in death from The Collective), but that it didn’t quite ring right as a conversation sometimes.

The gun scene also felt a tad video game/Hollywood and did jar with the naturalism that Tribe Twelve otherwise does so very well, but it didn’t really affect for me what worked – the spooky as hell investigation of the house (which had my heart racing) and Noah crumbling before our eyes, as well as Slendy. Oh God, Slendy. Those tentacles...:shivers:

Anyway, I can't wait for the next entry! Smile

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 5:43 am

ThinSuit

Did adam shot a few bullets in his house, or was it a fake gun ?

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 5:57 am

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Probably a fake gun, with that recoil you would probably drop it if you tried to fire it with one hand.

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 6:52 am

UnreadierLizard · Boot Joined: 20 Sep 2011 Posts: 44

My guess is that he used blanks.

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 6:53 am

Ol'Slendy

About the gun (OOG, adam said this)

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 7:17 am

Cursor · Boot Joined: 13 May 2012 Posts: 34

I loved this entry. The effects were amazing!

I feel like the acting was forced in some parts from both Noah and Mary. I'm gonna' be thinkin' 'bout that Slendy-warp all day. SOMEONE MAKE A .GIF

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 9:03 am

mokie · Unfettered Joined: 22 Mar 2011 Posts: 353

Anyone else want to shake him and tell him to shut up and listen for a minute, in case she called to say something more important than "Oh yeah, Milo? They ate him"? Eh, just me then.

That's not a criticism of how it was handled, btw--perfectly in character, very proactive paranoid. Just a reaction to the character on my part.

Not directly related to the video, but I appreciate the efforts he's made to keep the audience into the story between videos, even when real life ate into his time.

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 9:40 am

Oscar Langley · Decorated Joined: 14 Aug 2010 Posts: 268

Noah's "oh hey buddy" reaction is possibly the greatest line in Slenderman history.

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 9:46 am

nyc_jester · Veteran Joined: 31 Jul 2007 Posts: 128

Am I the only one that thinks there's a Slendy Mini-Me standing next to Slendy in the hallway? It was hard for me to tell. Could just be a nightstand or something, but it definitely looked like there was something next to Slendy before he held down the B Button so he could run super fast at Noah.

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 9:53 am

McWeird007 · Decorated Joined: 11 Dec 2010 Posts: 198 Location: Hell

These frames were at the very beginning during the static. It looks like someone with Noah's hat from "Nature Trail Visit"

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 11:04 am

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**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 11:26 am

UnreadierLizard · Boot Joined: 20 Sep 2011 Posts: 44

Whoever it was, this entry was just non stop badassery.

My hat goes off to Noah/Adam for all his hard work.

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 11:27 am

Seraphim · Decorated Joined: 21 Jun 2011 Posts: 234

This entry was....wow.

The entire thing was just totally flawless. Even if the acting was forced, we didn't come for Oscar worthy performances...we watch TribeTwelve to shit our pants and listen to Noah drop more f-bombs than Osbournes.

And this entry delivered in both regards.

**Posted:** Sat May 19, 2012 4:04 pm