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gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 516

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Captain Viking · Boot Joined: 19 Nov 2009 Posts: 37

Spoiler: The text will be distorted

**Posted:** Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:12 am

gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 516

**Posted:** Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:14 am

gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 516

Ok, first chapter is up. Also, I would like to apologize for the numbering on the chapters. they don;t give you an option of having a prologue and not giving it a number. So, when it says 2 Chapter 1, it is just chapter 1.

**Posted:** Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:35 am

Slender freak · Unfettered Joined: 16 Oct 2009 Posts: 368

**Posted:** Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:26 am

gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 516

**Posted:** Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:16 pm

magicmaster50060 · Boot Joined: 12 Dec 2009 Posts: 26

i want to read it but it isn't letting me gt to the 1st chapter Sad

I'll check back on it later though maybe the site is having problems?
sounds like an interesting concept though

**Posted:** Sun Dec 20, 2009 10:39 am

AshleySix · Decorated Joined: 28 Nov 2009 Posts: 160 Location: Texas

**Posted:** Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:00 pm

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gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 516

It's not? hmm, let me check. You do have to give your name and location, but I won't make ya. just type something in.

**Posted:** Sun Dec 20, 2009 6:01 pm

AshleySix · Decorated Joined: 28 Nov 2009 Posts: 160 Location: Texas

I dont even see where it says you have to do that. D':

**Posted:** Sun Dec 20, 2009 7:36 pm

DavFlamerock

Gave it my name & location, but no luck on finding the first chapter.

**Posted:** Sun Dec 20, 2009 7:57 pm

gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 516

Ok, try it now. I unpublished and republished it.

EDIT: Alright, it is fixed, and should be up. i apologize for that. I am still getting used to blovelspot.

**Posted:** Sun Dec 20, 2009 9:07 pm

Chief Poirot · Decorated Joined: 10 Nov 2009 Posts: 191

I'm liking it so far. Found a spelling error in the prologue: "Nessy's father loved her mother deeply, but once he hard the word baby, he was out the door and into divorce court.".

"Hard" should be "heard", correct? Can you edit in Blovel? First time even seeing the site.

Edit: "Disoriented, Vanessa's mother knocked the driver's sid door open and dashed for the back seat. " "Sid" should be "side", as well. But, other than those two things I loved the prologue. Now, time for bed. I'll read the rest tomorrow.

**Posted:** Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:26 pm

gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 516

**Posted:** Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:54 pm

curiously high is lazy. · Guest

If you need a beta to help you catch those errors prior to putting it up on there, I could help you out Very Happy

**Posted:** Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:33 am