Joined: 01 Nov 2012 Posts: 4
Final Portrait A short Slender Man Story Hi everybody! I'm new to the forums, and I though this would be the right place to share a story with you. If this is misplaced, maybe a mod could redirect it to the right place. This October I have been writing scary and funny stories related to the festivities in a blog I made called "La Galería del Terror" (The Gallery of Terror). It was a pet project of mine, and it ended yesterday on Halloween. For the finale, I decided to go with a Slender Man tale.
Inspired mainly by Marble Hornets, is a short tale in which a fictionalized version of myself is haunted by the paranormal entity known as the Slender Man during October. On the last night of the month a sinister plan is put in motion by unwillingly delivering my findings to my sister and asking her to put them online.
You can find the first part "Cuadro Final" or Final Portrait here:
And the second part, "Redención" or Redemption, here:
http://galeriadelterror-oscarrodriguez.blogspot.mx/2012/10/redencion_6032.html or "Redemption"
The story has links to the entry, Galería del Terror On The Road, which is a real life anecdote of a recent trip to Guanajuato, México, home of mummies and other stuff (with a fictional Slender tweak):
It's in Spanish, I'm from México, but I think some of the pics and the videos are understandable. I hope you enjoy it. Feedback would be appreciated.
Thu Nov 01, 2012 2:49 pm
Joined: 15 Apr 2012 Posts: 232
The videos, i think, were pretty well done. I can only imagine that I am missing the full effect of them, considering I do not speak fluent spanish, but, taking that into consideration, I thought it was good. I did notice a few times, I could tell that the slenderman was a costume, and something about the hands, or where the hands should have been, didn't quite look right to me. this was mostly during his appearance in the second video. overall, though, I liked this. good job.
Thu Nov 01, 2012 3:07 pm
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